That was his deeply growled whisper
As she, hungrily cupped the sides of his face,
Kissing him roughly, deeply with need
Her mouth singed with the heat of his passion
A smoldering inferno that pulsates
With each extended digit
That careens into her
She lines kisses down him neck
As he nibbles the base of her throat
Goose bumps trail down her arm
She anchors him against the wall
Undressing the rest of him
Hot candle wax drizzles down the center of his chest
She tracing her fingers through it, marking her name upon him
Hearing his breath tremble inside his chest
as he expels throaty moans
Pulling back, her husky breath pants in his ear
The scent of his cologne floats in the air
His lids droop with pleasure
As she teasingly barbers him with her gentle grazing
Around the ring of his empire
The tastes and smells of him whirl through her
Driving her even wilder
Drawing his mouth to every part of her body
She runs ruby red nails along his spine
Her vision grows hazy and she starts to sway
As he pays particular interest in lip service
to chiming the tiny bell that hangs
Just inside the arch
She tries to breathe him in-side her
She feels his arms grip her tightly
as heat pours out of him
Her craving still unsatisfied
Anything goes, came and went
The promise of satisfaction unfulfilled
Still she moans the words
He doesn’t want to hear
And insists he takes what he has earned
But he knows…
He guiltily leaves his unearned fee
On the dresser by the door
That has barely closed behind him
When he hears the battery-operated hum
well this was going along rather well until…i guess you just can not satisfy some eh? smiles…and i guess some men just dont know how as well…smiles.
Sometimes, that’s just the way it is – smile.
Unsatisfied and had to pay for it… what next… Hot, hot, hot and did I say….hot! 🙂 Very sexy write… poor woman.
Hey she could afford to pay for it – she wasn’t that poor thanks Daydreamertoo.
oh heck…didn’t expect where this was going…hot..and sad..
Hah! I’m guessing she wasn’t expecting it either. Thanks Claudia.
Super sexy writing! Oh, who hasn’t been here…all hot and bothered and sometimes you just can’t make it happen…well the title gave me a clue..hard to be left, uh, “unfinished” though. She didn’t even wait until he was out of earshot…
“She didn’t even wait until he was out of earshot…”
Thanks Bodhirose, perhaps the need to be satisfied, overrode the protocol to be polite about it?
Oh, yeah, true that!
Wow!!! Sexy, seductive poem! Very well written!
Thank you Daydreamer!
Steaming write….but still unsatisfied….that was a sad ending ~
Sorry to leave you hanging, Heaven. I believe the Rolling Stones said it best – you can’t always get what you want.
Didn’t expect the ending. Too bad. But your writing is very sexy, quite engaging.
I like throwing the occasional wrench into gears of conventional thinking. Thanks Myrna.
Dang that pesky wabbit!
LMAO! That pesky rabbit is always getting into things… 😉
Oh! Awesome write, by the way! I was so mad at the bunny, I forgot to tell ya! Hot stuff!
HAHAHAHA!!! You are a riot, thanks Charles.