18 comments on “On Fire

  1. Switching to Twitter hashtags LOL

    #wow

    #awesome

    #runbout (a slight Bajan-ism …. running around excitedly lol)

    #BOOM!

    I ent know what to say bout dis hey… zuss chroiss it hard ….!!!! Love it!

  2. Now I’ve had a chance to compose myself …. I love this piece from beginning to end – the words chosen and the rhythm … this entire poem POPS for me 🙂

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