Exquisite cacophony of aches
Running abstract through my psyche
Had lain witness to the battle
Of our conjoined fires danced under
You sleep the sleep of the just
In spangling coda, makes nimbus of
I know the beast is still inside and
The origami of our limbs
The ferment in my eyes your only warning
And watch as sparks shimmy anew in your eyes
The Sunday Whirl – Anniversary Wordle
Write a poem using the following words:
aches, abstract, cacophony, coda, dragon, ethereal,
exquisite, ferment, origami, shelved, shimmy, spangling
Oh – I love this! Right from the first mention of Luna through El Sol to Flame On! – pretty much brilliant … very cool …
Thank you, Seingraham.
Switching to Twitter hashtags LOL
#runbout (a slight Bajan-ism …. running around excitedly lol)
I ent know what to say bout dis hey… zuss chroiss it hard ….!!!! Love it!
Now I’ve had a chance to compose myself …. I love this piece from beginning to end – the words chosen and the rhythm … this entire poem POPS for me 🙂
Thanks Bajan. 😉
That has to be the very best way to wake up in the morning! A very sensuous poem.
Can’t argue that! Thanks Mary.
flame on indeed! Godd stuff, like the idea of the moon taking sides. As an aside – love your ‘About” above. 😉
Thank you and thank you. Mark! 😀
This is absolutely remarkable!
Thank you Sanaa.
Full of passion and desire this really opens up into a beautiful tapestry
flame of passion and a good morning 🙂
A very good morning. Thanks Sumana.
Vivid imagery in each stanza! I enjoyed especially the sparks in the eyes.
Thanks Mary, flame on.