Conflagration doused
In an
Exquisite cacophony of aches
I wake
Ethereal reminisces
Running abstract through my psyche
I smile
Sweet Luna
Had lain witness to the battle
Picking sides
Twin flames
Of our conjoined fires danced under
Indigo skies
Dragon shelved
You sleep the sleep of the just
Of angels
El Sol
In spangling coda, makes nimbus of
Your hair
But I
I know the beast is still inside and
You stir
Gently unfolding
The origami of our limbs
You wake
And blink
The ferment in my eyes your only warning
You smile
I inhale
And watch as sparks shimmy anew in your eyes
Then exhale
Flame on!
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The Sunday Whirl – Anniversary Wordle
Write a poem using the following words:
aches, abstract, cacophony, coda, dragon, ethereal,
exquisite, ferment, origami, shelved, shimmy, spangling
Raivenne-lations 
Oh – I love this! Right from the first mention of Luna through El Sol to Flame On! – pretty much brilliant … very cool …
http://aleapingelephant.blogspot.ca/2012/04/coda-of-crows-dragons-angels-and-swans.html
Thank you, Seingraham.
Switching to Twitter hashtags LOL
#wow
#awesome
#runbout (a slight Bajan-ism …. running around excitedly lol)
#BOOM!
I ent know what to say bout dis hey… zuss chroiss it hard ….!!!! Love it!
Now I’ve had a chance to compose myself …. I love this piece from beginning to end – the words chosen and the rhythm … this entire poem POPS for me 🙂
#ustoopid
Thanks Bajan. 😉
ROFL
That has to be the very best way to wake up in the morning! A very sensuous poem.
Can’t argue that! Thanks Mary.
flame on indeed! Godd stuff, like the idea of the moon taking sides. As an aside – love your ‘About” above. 😉
Thank you and thank you. Mark! 😀
This is absolutely remarkable!
xoxo
Thank you Sanaa.
Full of passion and desire this really opens up into a beautiful tapestry
Thanks Alan.
flame of passion and a good morning 🙂
A very good morning. Thanks Sumana.
Vivid imagery in each stanza! I enjoyed especially the sparks in the eyes.
Thanks Mary, flame on.