10 comments on “Life, Chance, Death, Pain, Faith

  1. Much clarity here that many never have the fortune to achieve… I especially like:

    life, the moment your eyes open’

  2. Damn…just, damn…This is really good. It is my first time reading poetry using the clarity pyramid form. Thanks for the link to an explanation. I want to try one of these. I like the grouping of the related poems to serve as stanzas of a larger poem which seems to represent how they are all interrelated.

  3. this is wonderful:


    the ultimate trust
    is the substance of hope
    evidence of things not seen

    ‘all that I have left in me now’

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