4 comments on “MLMM: Atriocaval Shunt

  1. I love the way you used palinoia in conjunction with the heart rate monitor that was really effective. I also know what you mean about the grime of hospitals. This was a very moving and emotional piece, I am so relieved there was a happy ending.

  2. I hope this is fiction! For this couple… a three hour argument leading to an engagement. They got this… a little coma can’t stop ’em. 🙂

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