4 comments on “This Morning

  1. I love this poem and the story it tells, how the first and last lines bookend each other so well. I like this form for what you’re writing, too. It’s like the first stanza is an expansion of this calm, this quiet – then we are interrupted by the noise and the break to the next stanza. I’m glad you wrote it, less glad you had to LIVE it.

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