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Stolen

Posted by Raivenne on July 23, 2013

Posted in: dVerse ~ Poets Pub, Just Me, Being Me, Love, OpenLinkNight, Poetry. Tagged: dVerse ~ Poets Pub, kiss, Kisses, love, Memories, OpenLinkNight, peaches, Poetry, rhyme scheme, sluice, summer. 21 Comments

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The memory of it still lingers
Like sticky nectar on our fingers
Made the more so in summer’s heat
From the vain attempts to sluice
Our chins of honeyed peaches juice
But in a moment replete
Under the fading eye of Sol
We heed the thrill to shun control
The stolen kiss even more sweet

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And this is the Nove Otto

The Nove Otto poetry form is a nine-lined poem with 8 syllables per line (isosyllabic). The rhyme scheme is as follows: aabccbddb

dVerse ~ Poets Pub | OpenLinkNight : Week 106

21 comments on “Stolen”

PassionPoet on July 23, 2013 at 3:18 PM said:

This lyrical kiss is sooooooooooo sweet …. love it, Rai ❤ ❤

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- Raivenne on July 24, 2013 at 2:30 PM said:
  
  Thank you, Robert.
  
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poetreecreations on July 23, 2013 at 3:23 PM said:

Reblogged this on poetreecreations.org.

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- Raivenne on July 24, 2013 at 2:30 PM said:
  
  Thanks!
  
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brian miller on July 23, 2013 at 3:43 PM said:

oo la la…what is it about the summer heat that stokes the other fires in our life….like the sticky fruit too…smiles.

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- Raivenne on July 24, 2013 at 2:31 PM said:
  
  I don’t know, but it is one heck of an aphrodisiac indeed. Thanks Brian.
  
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Talicha J. on July 23, 2013 at 4:50 PM said:

Wow, nice! It’s refreshing to come across a less used form, thanks for sharing such a great poem 🙂

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- Raivenne on July 24, 2013 at 2:32 PM said:
  
  Yay, another form lover! Thank you Talicha.
  
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  - Talicha J. on July 24, 2013 at 2:58 PM said:
    
    You are welcome!
blessedcursed8 on July 23, 2013 at 5:32 PM said:

Such beautiful imagery.

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- Raivenne on July 24, 2013 at 2:33 PM said:
  
  Thank you blessedcursed8.
  
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ayala on July 23, 2013 at 6:10 PM said:

Sweet!

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- Raivenne on July 24, 2013 at 2:33 PM said:
  
  Thanks!
  
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Audrey Howitt on July 23, 2013 at 9:16 PM said:

I love stolen kisses! Lovely write!

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- Raivenne on July 24, 2013 at 2:33 PM said:
  
  So do I, thanks Audrey!
  
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lovemorestudio on July 23, 2013 at 9:47 PM said:

Juicy 🙂 Reminds me of a piece I wrote on eating tangerines, as fun to write as yours was to read. ~peace, Jason

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- Raivenne on July 24, 2013 at 2:35 PM said:
  
  Hah, thanks Jason.
  
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missree2013 on July 24, 2013 at 11:03 AM said:

This is a darn good piece. Thanks for putting it out there.

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- Raivenne on July 24, 2013 at 2:35 PM said:
  
  Thanks for enjoying it missree2013.
  
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KATiE MiA FredericK! on July 24, 2013 at 3:41 PM said:

!1Love…Light Forever Love Fades Love Forever Light…Love1!

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- Raivenne on July 25, 2013 at 8:27 AM said:
  
  Much thanks to you to you thanks much.
  
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